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So, you kinda just animated a nerd talking to the screen.
He mentions that he's trying to catch a Moltres, but that's never shown.
just a dude talking to the screen, moving his arms a little.
In this case, the animation didn't add anything to the audio clip, and to be completely honest, I think the audio clip is funnier on it's own.

It's time you choose ONE thing to specialise in.

Honestly, if you're gonna try this hard to make it look like a machinima, why not just make an actual machinima? I really think that's just a convenient excuse to poop out super lazy content. You say you're doing it this way to focus more on the story, but the story is just... pointless. Why did the guy with the red hair need that power? The very first scene establishes that he's a competent fighter. I can tell you'll retort with something to the effect of "Because THEY couldn't beat the hackers". If they as a group couldn't handle it, why would only one character gain these abilities? It really is just bad pretty much all around. The art isn't engaging, the characters are all minor variations of eachother, and watching it made me feel like a fucking idiot. Please let this sink in: the humour was intended to be so accessible for young kids, that there isn't anything left for older ages to enjoy-- I actually felt stupid while watching this, it's insulting. Please hire a new writer, You've managed to show me time and time again that you many be impressive to all the little middle-school kids who frequent this site, but your writing/dialogue/concepts are very under-developed. And from what I can tell, you're just not in a place to be writing. Like, this is a reboot of some shit you made years ago, right? I've noticed that less capable writers latch onto the stories they created in their youth, because that's probably the high-point of their imaginativeness, and ingenuity. Further proof of this, is how many parodies you do. It's like you're totally incapable/unwilling to use your own intellectual property. If you think about it, this is a parody/tribute/expansion to that older series, and even with this being the most original thing you've ever produced, it's still pretty cliché in not only the premise, but also in the characters and the plot. I honestly, truly, sincerely think you need to pick ONE aspect of creating content, rather than being kinda bad at everything. You lack focus.

2/10, because I feel the co-authors shouldn't be lumped together with your naivety.

Haha

Look at all of these touchy faggots.
RIP Steve Appleman.

Thank you so much!

I added this to my favorites so I can refer to it later ;D
I like you style of teaching, it's very easy to follow.

I like this...

But its so untrue to the series. Roxas has no heart. It would be cool i if had nothing to do with kh.

meh

the concept is interesting but its quite slow paced and unrewarding. You at least could have added some music

Shit.
I really like this a lot.

It's too bad nobody gets it.

thx

Your music is much stronger with percussion, it also shows more thought/personality. The song didn't really take off anywhere, in my opinion, though. It seemed ended right as it began to become interesting, almost like an unfinished thought.

Nickelback

wen will they hav babys

Jesus!

You're making us look bad!

Clark?

That's me!
The blurry writing is pretty out of place, though.